क्या भविष्य को संजोने की लालसा
हमारी व्याकुलता अोर चिंता को बढ़ाती है?
नहीं, भविष्य के सपने सजाना
तो मनुष्य होने की
पहचान है।
यह व्यग्रता, उद्वेग तो
स्वंयसिद्ध , सर्वशक्तिमान बन
भविष्य को नियंत्रित करने की कोशिश का परिणाम है…….
क्या भविष्य को संजोने की लालसा
हमारी व्याकुलता अोर चिंता को बढ़ाती है?
नहीं, भविष्य के सपने सजाना
तो मनुष्य होने की
पहचान है।
यह व्यग्रता, उद्वेग तो
स्वंयसिद्ध , सर्वशक्तिमान बन
भविष्य को नियंत्रित करने की कोशिश का परिणाम है…….
Beautifully composed!!
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Thank you.
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bhut khub likha hai aapne
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Shukriya Priya. Mera hausala badhaane ke liye dhanyvaad. 😊😊
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Jabardast ……beautiful
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Dhanyvad Rohit.😊😊
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Never let the words fall short! 🙂
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Thank you so much Sweta. Its so kind of you friend.
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Truly deserved. You’re so welcome. 🙂
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So sweet of you. Thanks Sweta.
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true Rekha..but taking tension about future is in our nature
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Hmm…. There is a proverb in Hindi – चिंता और चिता एक समान. Thats way its said – do youre duty n leave the rest to Almighty. 😊😊
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I think We should not take tension about future. We should try our best to make present better
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Yes , living in present is good but future planning is also important. We should not try to control everything as it causes tension and stress. 😊😊
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एक जगह पढा था कि दो अवस्थाएँ हैं — satisfaction और complacency । व्यक्ति को complacency नहीं, मगर satisfaction होना चाहिए । Complacency न होने से व्यक्ति आगे बढता है और satisfaction होने से मानसिक शांति प्राप्त करता है । इस विषय पर और अधिक लिखने की इच्छा है, तब आपकी कविता को refer (share) करूँगा ।
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अमित जी , मन की शांति बहुत ज़रूरी है. अपने आप को मनसिक दबाव में रखने से कोई फायदा नहीँ. धर्म , आध्यात्म , योग, विज्ञान मनोविज्ञान सब यही बातें सिखलाते है. आपके विचार बिलकुल गीता के विचार जैसे है.
आप इस विषय पर पोस्ट ज़रूर लिखे. 😊😊
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It seems that my translator left these two words untouched: ‘Kavita’ and ‘Swnysiddh’. I wonder what they are supposed to mean..
Anyways, is this about how these days people (us, in general) tend to put greed (for power or material gains, perhaps) above all else?
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This poem says – future planning is good.but, We should not try to control the future as it causes tension and stress.
word meaning –
kavita- poem
Swnysiddh – one who says s/he can do or control everything.
Thanks for reading my post.
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बहुत ही संजीदा और सुलझे हुए शब्द
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बहुत धन्यवाद सरिता. 😊😊
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