मेरी पाँच कविताएँ / My 5 Poems Published in She The Shakti, Anthology– POEM 2
चक्रव्यु तोङने वाले ,
अभिमन्यु की तरह सुनती वहाँ,
बाहर की बातें –
बेटी बचाओ बेटी पढ़ाओ,
मुझे नहीं पता, मैं कौन हूं? बेटा या बेटी ?
पर बङे शुकून से मैं थी वहाँ,
सबसे सुरक्षित, महफूज।
तभी, एक दिन किसी ने प्रश्न किया –
बेटा है या बेटी ?
आवाज आई – बेटी !!
धीमा सा उत्तर आया – नहीं चाहिये, गिरा दो ।
Source: अभिमन्यु की तरह (कविता) poem of an unborn baby
Image from internet.
Nice 1. 👌
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thank you.😊
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👌👌👌👌
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Thanks.
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😊
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Very well written..
https://throughmyeyekratika.wordpress.com/2017/06/15/%e0%a4%b9%e0%a4%ae-%e0%a4%95%e0%a4%b2%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%af%e0%a4%be%e0%a4%81-%e0%a4%b9%e0%a5%88%e0%a4%82-%e0%a4%89%e0%a4%b8-%e0%a4%ac%e0%a4%97%e0%a4%bf%e0%a4%af%e0%a4%be-%e0%a4%95%e0%a5%80/
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Thank you Kratika.
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kyaa khub likhaa hai…..bahut hi sundar…..
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बहुत आभार।
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kya khub likhaa hai …..bahut hi sunder ….dil tak chhu jaanewaali.
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धन्यवाद। 🙂
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Very sad but still true. Good job!
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yes, Thank you.
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agar beti na hogi to duniya kaise basegi khuda ka kahar barsega tum par ise zinda na dafnao ye rehmat hai Allah ki ye Shajadiyan hai Ahle-Islam ki :- Huzur S.A.W (Quraan)
purane jamane me ladikiyon ko zinda dafn kar diya jata tha joki aaj bhi ho rha hai to Huzur e qreem hazrat Mohammad ne unhe roka or ye shabd kahe
isme islam word is liye use hua hai kyoki Quraan me Allah Farmate hai ke har insaan pita Aadam or maa Hawwa ki Aulad hai iska matlab wah imaan wala hota hai baad me wah apne mutabik rasta chun leta hai isi liye isme islaam word use hua
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बहुत अच्छी बात बताई आपने। इस्लाम की खुबसूरत बातें बताने के लिये शुक्रिया दानिश।
सारे धर्म सही बातें बताते अौर सही राह दिखाते हैं। नारी का सम्मान करने की सीख देते हैं। पर कुछ लोग आज भी नारी के मोल को नहीं समझते हैं।
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aap logo me Anu or Manu bola jata hai ham logo ko madarso me bata jata hai thik isi tarah ki manyataye aapki bhi hai
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हाँ , मनु को प्रथम पुरुष बताया गया है जिनके द्वारा दुनिया में मानव की उत्पत्ति हुई है.
बहुत धन्यवाद दानिश. आपके पास बहुत अच्छी अच्छी जानकारियां है.,
😊😊
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That’s sad
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Yes sad and bitter truth …. ….
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कविता ऐसी है कि “आह” और “वाह” एक साथ लिखना पड़ेगा।
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बहुत आभार , इतनी सटीक प्रतिक्रिया देने के लिये.
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A sad reality presented so well.
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Yes , this is sad an bitter too.
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Very Much Heart Touching!
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yes , condition of women is still pathetic .
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True, I agree.
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Thanks.
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Nice one mam
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Thank you
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Welcome
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Nice one
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Thank you .
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